Projektbeschreibung
It is necessary to bring to mind the diploma
1.in paragraph 2.2. Change the name to the Procedure and condition for the participation of individuals, legal entities, etc. (write who else) in investment activities. Of 2.2. To move part of the text to Chapter 3, so it is not disclosed at all, this is as far as investment contracts are concerned. (sic). 48 et seq.)
2. to remove the word image as a synonym for use is presented
3. Completely rewrite Chapter 3 (you can leave the first paragraph), but it will sound like 3.1.
In Chapter 3, we will discuss all investment agreements.
4. to redo the conclusion and introduction in the introduction should write the provisions for protection at least 5, they are made from each chapter evenly throughout the work.In conclusion, you need to remove what is not in the work, in conclusion you need to write in addition to the conclusions for the whole work of the proposal to amend the current legislation.
5. St. 76 the end of paragraph 3.1. When dividing into 2 categories contractual forms (by the way, transfer the concept of an investment contract to this paragraph), it is necessary to correctly justify this division (it is not made justified, or give justification to this division, specify criteria and write clear wording) What is common, what is different. And rewrite the entire 3.2. Here is the real nonsense - it is necessary to systematize everything and generally consider 2 groups (since the division is such in paragraph 3.1.)
There is no clear division between one group of contracts, then the other simply do not take anything from 3.2. I'm gonna write it all over again.
6. The reference list should correspond to what plagiarism revealed - in our case, the list does not correspond to what was written.
7.Properly design the work, the work is not completely decorated, make the correct footnotes and everything else.
1.in paragraph 2.2. Change the name to the Procedure and condition for the participation of individuals, legal entities, etc. (write who else) in investment activities. Of 2.2. To move part of the text to Chapter 3, so it is not disclosed at all, this is as far as investment contracts are concerned. (sic). 48 et seq.)
2. to remove the word image as a synonym for use is presented
3. Completely rewrite Chapter 3 (you can leave the first paragraph), but it will sound like 3.1.
In Chapter 3, we will discuss all investment agreements.
4. to redo the conclusion and introduction in the introduction should write the provisions for protection at least 5, they are made from each chapter evenly throughout the work.In conclusion, you need to remove what is not in the work, in conclusion you need to write in addition to the conclusions for the whole work of the proposal to amend the current legislation.
5. St. 76 the end of paragraph 3.1. When dividing into 2 categories contractual forms (by the way, transfer the concept of an investment contract to this paragraph), it is necessary to correctly justify this division (it is not made justified, or give justification to this division, specify criteria and write clear wording) What is common, what is different. And rewrite the entire 3.2. Here is the real nonsense - it is necessary to systematize everything and generally consider 2 groups (since the division is such in paragraph 3.1.)
There is no clear division between one group of contracts, then the other simply do not take anything from 3.2. I'm gonna write it all over again.
6. The reference list should correspond to what plagiarism revealed - in our case, the list does not correspond to what was written.
7.Properly design the work, the work is not completely decorated, make the correct footnotes and everything else.
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