Flyer advertisement

We need to develop a flyer design (2 third-party) and a competent and easy-to-understand description of our action. So that the person who received the flyer on the street or in the shopping center did not throw it away, as is usual with flyers. I saw, read, saved and called. The description of the action is indicated in the attached files. In our flyer, in our opinion, everything is clear, but showing it to other people we encounter the fact that people do not understand the essence. It is advisable to do in less than 5 days.